A review by mistressop
Allure by Nina Lane

4.0

yes this guy keeps making the same stupid mistakes. yes i cant believe this damn author did that to her.. im so fucking pissed off about it right now. yes this book isnt perfect im not huge on this dropping tidbits of the past thing it keeps doing cos it's like walking into a half done convo it's just awarked sometimes.. but over all i really like this story

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you didnt hit hard enough during the miscarriage you kinda felt like the watcher instead of being on her emotional track. which was kinda distant.. if she was numb out at the end of that we should have felt a bit numb out.. instead it came across not as hard as it could of been i was mildly annoyed. i also think it wasnt a good idea..what does that make dead baby numb what 5? dude (yes i know that was tacky as hell but how many freakin bad baby things can you put in a fucking book author really really) ... first one was his own thing but what's up with dude man's spunk. also i just i dunno it didnt work. for me because it stop feeling as real for me

i gotta stop writing these damn reviews after workin then reading until i almost fall asleep oh well