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Dirty Desire
by Avril Ashton
I guess hope dies last, sometimes I don't know why I read books to the end even though I don't enjoy them much at all. I admit I wanted to read this just for the smut. But it wasn't really worth it for that alone.
The book is pure chaos.
The two main characters have so many "issues" and are so poorly portrayed. I found it extremely difficult to connect with them. And when I finally did, more and more characters emerged who became important and brought their own " issues" with them. It got super messy and the similar names don't help either. I can't tell them all apart, the descriptions don't do anything and the language of each character doesn't differ either. Oh dear ...
Then, sex between the twins, the main characters, turns into sex with everyone else. I'm all for poly, but this is probably the worst portrayal of polyamory I've had my hands on. The intention to show this as a big found family is a nice thought, but the execution is insanely bad. I get absolutely no connection to it.
And then. Watch out! Change of narrative perspective, but not as before between the brothers, but just a jump to one of the secondary characters.
The book is pure chaos.
The two main characters have so many "issues" and are so poorly portrayed. I found it extremely difficult to connect with them. And when I finally did, more and more characters emerged who became important and brought their own " issues" with them. It got super messy and the similar names don't help either. I can't tell them all apart, the descriptions don't do anything and the language of each character doesn't differ either. Oh dear ...
Then, sex between the twins, the main characters, turns into sex with everyone else. I'm all for poly, but this is probably the worst portrayal of polyamory I've had my hands on. The intention to show this as a big found family is a nice thought, but the execution is insanely bad. I get absolutely no connection to it.
And then. Watch out! Change of narrative perspective, but not as before between the brothers, but just a jump to one of the secondary characters.