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A review by mmariep2
Calen's Captive by Lucy Leroux
3.0
3.5
This one hit a little different from the first one. Definitely some very specific kinks here, which is fine. Its well written, the characters are interesting and true to their descriptions, the story flows, but I was left feeling off about a few things; the h not being assertive about the things she was uncertain about (babies), and the ending with the Russian mob felt unresolved as there was no actual confrontation for either protagonist (the situation was taken care of of screen by other parties). Other than those items, it was a fairly good story.
This one hit a little different from the first one. Definitely some very specific kinks here, which is fine. Its well written, the characters are interesting and true to their descriptions, the story flows, but I was left feeling off about a few things; the h not being assertive about the things she was uncertain about (babies), and the ending with the Russian mob felt unresolved as there was no actual confrontation for either protagonist (the situation was taken care of of screen by other parties). Other than those items, it was a fairly good story.