A review by brittanylicitra
99 Percent Mine by Sally Thorne

1.0

Oh my gosh, this book sucks! Do not read it! The writing is so terrible I kept thinking I was having a stroke or falling asleep while reading because it made no sense. Thorne jumps around topics and doesn’t have a lot of speaker tags for the dialogue, so it is confusing who is talking and what is going on. There seems to be little description of the setting, what the characters are doing, and what's going on – so confusing!

Besides the terrible writing, this book is so problematic. First off, the title should be an indication – the characters have this whole thing about the other person being “theirs” and not someone else’s. And the whole bad-girl good guy thing that is going on is not selling it for me. For a large portion of the book, they seem to not be together because Tom thinks he is not good enough for Darcy and there is some weird thing going on with her twin brother Jaimie who also sucks.

Also could Darcy please just get a bra that fits so her strap is not always slipping off her shoulder? Please and thank you.