A review by ctsquirrel
Untouchable by Kay Simone, Ruthie Luhnow

3.0

This says about 700 pages on my reader and it felt long. I skipped over a bit since they seemed to keep going back and forth (mostly I skipped from after the snowed-in bit to when Gil showed up). I've never really liked the present tense story-telling and couldn't get into that. Then also the random gaps on the page were annoying. Usually these would indicate a change in POV, but the POV changes often on the same page with no gaps. Also this probably added to the page count. This felt like when a college student needed to make a page count and changed the margins around and added spaces. They weren't necessary and detracted from the flow of the story.

I liked the characters alright and the dogs, but I had to work too hard to stay into the story.