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bookhoundess 's review for:
Bennett Mafia
by Tijan
DNF at 3%. I don't understand why the author would want readers to think the FMC is a moron, but she nailed it. Smacking herself with a rock hard enough to draw blood trying to kill a fly is a great way to make me lose all interest in continuing.
The first chapter is FMC talking endlessly about all the other characters' hair. When she says the roommate has copper hair on one page and then "dark black" on the next, I decided to quit. Continuity errors within the first chapter, plus describing black as dark, was too much.
The first chapter is FMC talking endlessly about all the other characters' hair. When she says the roommate has copper hair on one page and then "dark black" on the next, I decided to quit. Continuity errors within the first chapter, plus describing black as dark, was too much.