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flintlocklane 's review for:

The Butcher and the Wren by Alaina Urquhart
2.0

Definitely felt like the work of a first time author. The prose felt stale; the author relied on familiar imagery and similes. The midpoint twist, while fun, makes very little sense. The plotting felt off; the end felt more like the author forgot to write the third act than intentionally wrote a cliffhanger.