A review by lnlaufeyson
Between Love and Loathing by Shain Rose

medium-paced

3.75

I loved the FMC with a disease. Overall I enjoyed the story i just wish the author or editor would have done another comb over of the writing. I know its hard to catch every mistake, but their were quiet a few.

for instance, at one point they are on the phone with his ex and doing the deed, well the phone is never mentioned again. Did the ex hang up? Also the ex is never mentioned after that, did she give up? Like what happened. Another time was in the restaurant it says he picks her up and puts her on the counter, but a few lines later he is spinning her around to bend her over it? Maybe I missed something. There are more but I won't list them all.