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The World Walker by Ian W. Sainsbury
4.0

This was a much more engaging story than I expected it to be and I'm excited to jump right in to the next one.

It does, however, suffer from some fairly poor copy editing. Things like verb tense switches, duplicate words, typos and the like. Just enough to be distracting but not enough to ruin the story or cause you to stumble trying to understand the author.

Even with all that it's a solid 4 star story, maybe more.