A review by nagisasigh
The Love Hypothesis by Ali Hazelwood

lighthearted fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? No
  • Loveable characters? No
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

1.5

i would've called this poorly written if i came across it on AO3, its wild that its published.

olive was an extremely frustrating character to be stuck listening to and not even in a fun way that makes you think. adam was entirely one dimensional and could've been swapped for a plank of wood at any time and i wouldn't have noticed. there were so many scenes where the author described insignificant things in extreme detail for so long too. i ended up having to skim whole sections. 

sometimes its okay to leave fanfiction unpublished.