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jessihg12 's review for:
Wildest Dreams
by Kristen Ashley
The plot was very captivating, and I never felt bored. It pretty much jumps straight into action. The characters were pretty well rounded and diverse. My issue comes from the way the main charcater describes everything and the overuse of the word "cool". I understand that the author is trying to convey that the main character is confused and being rushed into things she does not understand. I also understand she is supposed to be from this world in a somewhat modern time going into a fantasy world that is much more anchient seeming. However, I feel like this aspect could have been conveyed using a wider variety of more modern slang or just not pushing this issue quite so hard. I felt noticeable lack of diversity in adjectives interfered with the world building.