A review by milointhewoods
Stone and Steel by Eboni J. Dunbar

2.0

there are some serious editing issues with typos, misspellings and weird speech issues, the prose is debatable, the characters are underdeveloped, the speech is really stilted and aaliyah’s taste in women is frankly awful, there’s too much incest, relationships are so rushed, reveals don’t make sense because there’s not enough context.

the world building is fascinating and i loved the premise. i think this story has so much potential and what it really needs is to be a full length novel, with some serious background work and a much better editor. but yeah, although i didn’t enjoy this, i liked the settings and a lot of the themes so i see a lot of promise in this author.