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A review by wunder
One Night in Boukos by A.J. Demas
2.0
Pleasant but mediocre. Could be shorter or deeper, either one would help. Thin characters, a plot with surprises rather than developments, and so on.
For example, the first third of chapter 5 should have been deleted. A character walks through the town and notices things. He noticed something peculiar about streetside statues and I expected that to be a plot point, but no such luck.
For example, the first third of chapter 5 should have been deleted. A character walks through the town and notices things. He noticed something peculiar about streetside statues and I expected that to be a plot point, but no such luck.