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Toasty Inside by Zoe Mona
3.25
lighthearted relaxing medium-paced

This was okay, for the most part. It really could've used another round of edits. Missing periods, missing words, and wrong words being used.

AND HOW DARE THERE NOT BE A SCENE WHERE HE GOES DOWN ON HER?!