thehoneypie 's review for:

Loving the Legend by Kit Grey
1.0

Realistically, the MC got his armpit sucked, licked and fucked…. And I should have quit at that point.

The dialogue sounded like the author said:
“hey chat gpt, write me some woke dialogue about being enlightened and treating my body like a temple and tell the reader I only eat sugar free, gluten free, enjoyment free food because I want to keep myself focussed and healthy, make it sound extra philosophical and wise though, and make sure the dialogue goes for like 4 FUCKING PAGES and then follow up with my MC's saying cool shit like... 'word' and 'you’re wildin' and 'beast' and 'facts' because we wanna keep it hip n fresh”