A review by trodabough
Return of the Rogue by Donna Fletcher

2.75

The book is just okay. It would have been loads better if the author SHOWED the events instead of TELLING. Almost everything happened off page and we were told what was going on by the characters instead of seeing them being done by them. I wanted MORE. I wanted to see the characters work through their problems and not be told that an indiscriminate amount of time had passed and suddenly the FMC was in love with the MMC,  and this thing happened, and also this thing also happened.

I also think that the FMC changed too quickly and (I hate to say this) was a bit of a Mary Sue with he  sudden ability to shoot a bow and be great a self defense. Like it's one thing if she trains for weeks, but being suddenly amazing after 3 days??? Like please showher stuggle and overcome. 

 I will probably continue with the series, but my expectations for the books are low.