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A review by cadiva
Love on Fire by Zach Jenkins
3.0
Needed a bit of polish but a sweet story
This isn't a bad story and has the makings of a good one with a bit of a tighter edit.
The story rambles a bit and gets tied up in Clay's insecurities which make it drag a little.
Ezra is also a bit pushy and then he sort of drops off and becomes more of a background character than the other MC and the rapid about face was a bit too quick.
But on the whole it's a fairly harmless romance which has a sweet neat ending.
This isn't a bad story and has the makings of a good one with a bit of a tighter edit.
The story rambles a bit and gets tied up in Clay's insecurities which make it drag a little.
Ezra is also a bit pushy and then he sort of drops off and becomes more of a background character than the other MC and the rapid about face was a bit too quick.
But on the whole it's a fairly harmless romance which has a sweet neat ending.