j_rowley 's review for:

Nicholas St. North and the Battle of the Nightmare King by Laura Geringer, William Joyce

2.0

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Really good story idea. Beautiful drawings. Just felt that there needed to be some variety in the sentence structure. And big fault in that one of the characters comes up with "if you believe, it will come true" and, if that is so, how come they just can't defeat Pitch by believing it? I mean, they bring a character back to life by just believing it. Maybe a little more thought should have been behind that or some better editing.