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Cruel Paradise by J.T. Geissinger
1.0

I'm sorry, but what point is the author trying to make in this scene where the heroine's two best friends are arguing?

“Oh, you think you’re such a stunner, huh? You look like something I drew with my left hand.” I say, “Girls.” They ignore me. Fin says, “Don’t make me have to smack the extra chromosome out of you.”

As far as I know, an extra chromosome is related to Down Syndrome. So is Finn implying the other friend is "flawed", either mentally or physically? This just reads bad. The scene adds absolutely nothing to the story and is offensive.