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A review by goliathfrog
An Assassin's Deception by Harper Wylde, A.K. Koonce
3.0
Decent continuation, but where was the editor
I wanted to like this one, but it was so hard to enjoy it when it was riddled with typos and grammatical errors. There were so many missing words and letters. I’m usually not that picky about typos, they seem to be very common in indie books but this one just had too many to ignore. There were other issues that a good editor should have caught as well. For example, at one point the main character is internally debating whether to do one thing or the other and the sentence in something like ‘I didn’t have time for blabla so I went with option A’ but actually she was going with the second thing. I had to read that part over and over to make sense of it.
I wanted to like this one, but it was so hard to enjoy it when it was riddled with typos and grammatical errors. There were so many missing words and letters. I’m usually not that picky about typos, they seem to be very common in indie books but this one just had too many to ignore. There were other issues that a good editor should have caught as well. For example, at one point the main character is internally debating whether to do one thing or the other and the sentence in something like ‘I didn’t have time for blabla so I went with option A’ but actually she was going with the second thing. I had to read that part over and over to make sense of it.