A review by minipanda
Last Hit by Jessica Clare, Jen Frederick

2.0

This isn't a new story, a hitman falls for a girl while on a job. He's been watching her from afar. She's everything he isn't, innocent and pure. He can't help himself, but he's drawn to her even though he knows this puts her in danger. Of course his worst fear came true.

Some issues:
1. Pacing!!! You would think this would be full of suspense and would be fast paced, but it was the exact opposite. It's so slow! Eye glazingly slow. Pacing is everything, you can have a good storyline but if the pacing is not there then the story will get lost.
2. The lack of characters development, they are too one dimensional.
3. The relationship between the two protagonists. Insta-love/ insta-lust to the point of stupidity. It took her so long to question him about stalking her. Even after he openly admits he's been watching and stalking her, she's okay with it?