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A review by goliathfrog
Catching Genesis by Nicole Riddley
2.0
Okay.... So this story has the potential to be really good. The story is there. The ideas, the plot, the characters, they’re good. Unfortunately, the writing is really juvenile and at times it’s hard to read without cringing. The book needs some serious editing for grammar. I usually overlook minor grammatical issues, but the tenses are all over the place and many sentences are missing words and pronouns. A lot of the writing is just not super developed and the author does a lot of telling instead of showing.
It’s disappointing because I really did think the story was interesting and had a lot of original elements for something in a pretty common trope. I can see a lot of potential from the author, but I think she needs to work a bit more on her storytelling.
It’s disappointing because I really did think the story was interesting and had a lot of original elements for something in a pretty common trope. I can see a lot of potential from the author, but I think she needs to work a bit more on her storytelling.