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A review by sarasbooktalk
If He Had Been with Me by Laura Nowlin
2.0
So.. I don't like when it jumps in time with no indication that it does.
Just a small "4 months earlier" or something whould have been perfect.
It was confusin and anticlimatic.
It built up in the start that sometinhg happened and then when it did happen it was just.. meeh.
And I do understand why at the end, but it was all just the weird thinking from a teenage girl and nothing really made sense.
The tiara, the depression, what did it all mean? It felt unfinished for me.
I love a good sob story but this wasn't it for me.
I skimmed through most of it, that's why I read it so quickly. Out of one page I could read maybe 4 sentences and get the picture.
I can think of a few that would LOVE this.
Just a small "4 months earlier" or something whould have been perfect.
It was confusin and anticlimatic.
It built up in the start that sometinhg happened and then when it did happen it was just.. meeh.
And I do understand why at the end, but it was all just the weird thinking from a teenage girl and nothing really made sense.
The tiara, the depression, what did it all mean? It felt unfinished for me.
I love a good sob story but this wasn't it for me.
I skimmed through most of it, that's why I read it so quickly. Out of one page I could read maybe 4 sentences and get the picture.
I can think of a few that would LOVE this.