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A review by litwithleigh
Virgin Territory by Lia Riley
2.0
2.5 rounded down i'm annoyed about the luluroe mention
writing: good | plot: needs work but tough to execute at this page length | ending: ight lol
my opinion
This is the shortest and therefore the most insta-lovey, so brace yourself. Can someone hire a developmental editor for this author because she can actually write but it's like she challenges herself to wildin out every third page. PLS MA'AM IM TRYING TO BE A FAN!!!
Like the other two books, the FMC was a head-scratcher. Margot is all about strong, independent vibes, but has a no ginger rule because she was smashed and passed by a ginger.... IN HIGH SCHOOL. 7 YEARS AGO. I'm sorry to say but the fact that he was ginger had NOTHING to do with his behaviour. Also, SHE WORE LULUROE LEGGINGS. LULUROE. LULU. ROE.?????? YES, THE PYRAMID SCHEME. WTF.
This is about, you guessed it, a virgin, but with a lil reverse uno. HE'S the virgin, and she's the community bicycle (respectfully this is a gender neutral term). Bold storyline but if there's one thing I learned about this author from this series, is that she's not afraid to go there. Wherever that may be, she's there. And everywhere else. As you can see I'm still going through it.
If my notes are correct, I think in this book she wrote the line that not even Jane Austen's mind could conceive: "a bead of precum gleamed from the tip, refracting light like a diamond" Anddddddd we're done. Goodnight and God Bless America.
pros and cons
pros: i like the writing style, interesting storyline with male virgin
cons: something trifling occurs or is said every other page, fmc was annoying (again)
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writing: good | plot: needs work but tough to execute at this page length | ending: ight lol
my opinion
This is the shortest and therefore the most insta-lovey, so brace yourself. Can someone hire a developmental editor for this author because she can actually write but it's like she challenges herself to wildin out every third page. PLS MA'AM IM TRYING TO BE A FAN!!!
Like the other two books, the FMC was a head-scratcher. Margot is all about strong, independent vibes, but has a no ginger rule because she was smashed and passed by a ginger.... IN HIGH SCHOOL. 7 YEARS AGO. I'm sorry to say but the fact that he was ginger had NOTHING to do with his behaviour. Also, SHE WORE LULUROE LEGGINGS. LULUROE. LULU. ROE.?????? YES, THE PYRAMID SCHEME. WTF.
This is about, you guessed it, a virgin, but with a lil reverse uno. HE'S the virgin, and she's the community bicycle (respectfully this is a gender neutral term). Bold storyline but if there's one thing I learned about this author from this series, is that she's not afraid to go there. Wherever that may be, she's there. And everywhere else. As you can see I'm still going through it.
If my notes are correct, I think in this book she wrote the line that not even Jane Austen's mind could conceive: "a bead of precum gleamed from the tip, refracting light like a diamond" Anddddddd we're done. Goodnight and God Bless America.
pros and cons
pros: i like the writing style, interesting storyline with male virgin
cons: something trifling occurs or is said every other page, fmc was annoying (again)
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