A review by phantomlimb
Working Title by Holley Trent

2.0

Absolute blender of a story. So many disjointed thoughts and dialog. Its like listening in on thought process, rather that a story. There are paragraphs that work together, then all of the sudden you are lost because the speaker changes. 80% of the time you don't know who is saying what. For a supposed romance it is very low key and drole, there is no sense of anticipation.