sparkles_f 's review for:

Fractured Freedom: Special Edition Paperback by Shain Rose

2.0

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I read the physical copy of this book and there were so many formatting errors. A cursory glance through the final proof would have been enough to catch them. The font switched in places, literally 12 words were squished together into one word--so that means there was a paragraph formatting error somewhere--and I reread two pages that had the font resized before realizing "oh, no--they're not trying to show that it's different dialogue between characters. This is actually just messed up copy." (Is this why it was a special edition? Was this the unedited first draft or something?)

Oh--And I know that I said I wasn't going to nitpick and roll my eyes but Goddamn this story was awful.