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A review by ratetheromance
The First Date by Zara Stoneley
1.0
This book had a cute, if predictable, premise but I just couldn't keep reading it past 1/3 of the way through. The writing is all over the place in a way I haven't experienced before. It seemed jumbled and incredibly jumpy, like an ADD journey of constantly shifting tropes.
And the amount of internal dialog was just INSANE. I counted 12 pages straight of obsessive internal dialog that just spun in circles until I was completely bored.
I finally gave up. This book lacked originality, focused writing, and a clear narrative.
And the amount of internal dialog was just INSANE. I counted 12 pages straight of obsessive internal dialog that just spun in circles until I was completely bored.
I finally gave up. This book lacked originality, focused writing, and a clear narrative.