A review by ramakn22
A Betrayal of Storms by Ben Alderson

adventurous emotional hopeful inspiring medium-paced

• Plot- or character-driven? A mix
• Strong character development? It's complicated
• Loveable characters? It's complicated
• Diverse cast of characters? No
• Flaws of characters a main focus? No

3.25

I love the concept, it's just needs further editing. The writing style starts in one place and jumps around in tone and sometimes it feels like they're trying to sound very Tolkein and literally a sentence later using modern slang and grammar. I still support this author, I think every book he writes is better and better, but the tone and story focus changes can be hard to read.