A review by lostcupofstars
Picnic in the Storm by Yukiko Motoya

dark emotional funny lighthearted mysterious reflective sad medium-paced

4.0

Women & Identity is the key theme throughout these stories.

The Lonesome Bodybuilder - 4/5

I liked the theme of identity in this and how it was brought forward.

Fitting Room - 5/5

This was so weird but I loved it! Weirdly relatable in a lot of ways lol. What does it mean to be a woman?

Typhoon - 5/5 

Another great story. It said so much in such a short span of pages. And I will never really complain about the presence of magic realism. Hope, possibility, community. 

I Called You by Name - 4/5

Intriguing. I felt like I could really imagine what the curtain looked like. Identity, belonging, loss, paranoia.

An Exotic Marriage - 3.75/5

This was a strange one. I think it could have done with being a little more concise. What I did love about it was the relationship between San and Kitae. A story about identity, individuality, codependency, sacrifice, temptation, freedom - so many themes in this one and I reckon I will be thinking about it for weeks to come. 

Paprika Jiro - 2/5

This one was perhaps a little too abstract for me? Wasn’t really sure what it was trying to say. Maybe like a tooth fairy type deal where it only works/happens if you believe in it. Could be about the strength of belief/acceptance/fear etc but in general it fell flat compared to its predecessors.

How to Burden the Girl - 2/5

I think this would have worked better for me if it wasn’t a conversation. Interesting enough story but it was too much tell and too short to build anything else. 

The Women - 3.5/5

The phrase ‘too little too late’ springs to mind here. Bit of a weird one but there are so many interesting things to interpret from this.

Q&A - 4/5

The saddle answer sold this for me lol. It was a bit random but it brought something a little lighter than the other stories. Absurd but honest. About who you are, who you think you should be and who you want to be. 

The Dogs - 3/5

This one had a bit of a Shirley Jackson feel to it. I liked the eerie, isolated atmosphere and the townspeople being shifty peaked my interest. I guess this could also be interpreted a number of ways.

The Straw Husband - 3.5/5

Not sure this was the right story to end on, but I liked it. The magical realism made it more interesting to read and added a lot of dynamics in a short space. The representation of anger made sense to me. 

Overall this was a mixed collection, a much stronger start than finish, but I imagine I’ll be thinking about these stories for quite some time. 

Side note - the synopsis doesn’t reflect the contents very well.