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chelseathebookaddict 's review for:
Finding My Pack
by Lane Whitt
I am not sure how I feel about this book. First of all, it was interesting and compelling enough that I finished it and plan to continue the series. That alone bumps this from a 2 star to a 3 star book. The world building is decent and I like where the plot is moving. I thought I figured out the twist but it seems like I haven't got all the pieces right so that is promising! I hate when I figure things out too easily.
What I didn't like about this book:
- the FMC is just way too immature. It fits her character type but her innocence and immaturity makes this book feel icky. She resembles a small child in many of the ways she talks and acts. And for grown wolves that are centuries old to fall in love with a character that is child-like - ewww. And to top it all off - her name is Kitten. Like her actual name. I don't know why I think that name is ok as a nickname in other books but as a real name in this book -- I loathe it.
- WAY TOO MANY GUYS. 8 wolves are in an existing family when she arrives. And they just agree that they are going to share her. I knew there would be 8 guys going in, so I was ready to take notes and try to keep them all separate but I still find myself very confused on who is who. Without looking at my notes this is what I remember about the guys:
Remy: the leader and oldest
Tristan: the cook
Logan: the fashion guy who helps her with clothes and her hair
Reed: the artist
Ash: the gentle giant
Finn: the bookworm
Kellan: the doctor
Jace: the asshole that didn't like her at first
I have surprised myself that I remember this much about the guys. After almost 12 hours of listening to this book - I feel like I should know more about each guy. I still confuse them while listening.
This book is also relatively clean without any sex. There are a few scenes that start to get steamy, but I'm glad the author didn't take it far due to her innocent nature and the fact we are not sure of her age. She had counted 16 summers so far but can't remember when she started counting summers. Most kids don't have memories until ages 3/4 so I'm guessing she is 19/20 years old but she has a great memory so maybe she is in the 17-18 range.
I am left with a lot of questions and that crazy cliffhanger so I will be continuing. The only hope this series has is it turning into a fated mate storyline because that is the only way I accept an "instalove" trope. I just can't comprehend why they all love her so far. Its too much.
What I didn't like about this book:
- the FMC is just way too immature. It fits her character type but her innocence and immaturity makes this book feel icky. She resembles a small child in many of the ways she talks and acts. And for grown wolves that are centuries old to fall in love with a character that is child-like - ewww. And to top it all off - her name is Kitten. Like her actual name. I don't know why I think that name is ok as a nickname in other books but as a real name in this book -- I loathe it.
- WAY TOO MANY GUYS. 8 wolves are in an existing family when she arrives. And they just agree that they are going to share her. I knew there would be 8 guys going in, so I was ready to take notes and try to keep them all separate but I still find myself very confused on who is who. Without looking at my notes this is what I remember about the guys:
Remy: the leader and oldest
Tristan: the cook
Logan: the fashion guy who helps her with clothes and her hair
Reed: the artist
Ash: the gentle giant
Finn: the bookworm
Kellan: the doctor
Jace: the asshole that didn't like her at first
I have surprised myself that I remember this much about the guys. After almost 12 hours of listening to this book - I feel like I should know more about each guy. I still confuse them while listening.
This book is also relatively clean without any sex. There are a few scenes that start to get steamy, but I'm glad the author didn't take it far due to her innocent nature and the fact we are not sure of her age. She had counted 16 summers so far but can't remember when she started counting summers. Most kids don't have memories until ages 3/4 so I'm guessing she is 19/20 years old but she has a great memory so maybe she is in the 17-18 range.
I am left with a lot of questions and that crazy cliffhanger so I will be continuing. The only hope this series has is it turning into a fated mate storyline because that is the only way I accept an "instalove" trope. I just can't comprehend why they all love her so far. Its too much.