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Fum
by Adam Rapp
I really wanted to like this story. The idea of it is amazing. Sadly, it's over written to the point of being almost incomprehensible. When you have to stop to diagram a sentence to make sure you're reading it properly, it's hard to enjoy the story.
It's a shame because like I say, the idea is amazing and there's the bones of a good story here. I just couldn't deal with the language. DNF at 10%. I'll be watching out for the author, though, I think there are good things ahead of him.
Receiving an ARC did not affect my review in any way.
It's a shame because like I say, the idea is amazing and there's the bones of a good story here. I just couldn't deal with the language. DNF at 10%. I'll be watching out for the author, though, I think there are good things ahead of him.
Receiving an ARC did not affect my review in any way.