A review by elusorius
Things Have Gotten Worse Since We Last Spoke And Other Misfortunes by Eric LaRocca

2.0

Things have gotten worse since we last spoke:

I devoured this novella in one sitting, it reads so easily. The format makes it feel like I'm on a chat forum, I absolutely love it. It's so clever. The plot is... something. Disturbing, questionable, entertaining, interesting, disgusting... Because of it's size, it's really fast paced. I think it could have benefited from some extra pages to have more build up and make the story more engaging. Also, the ending was abrupt. But I think I liked it. 3/5.

The Enchantment:

Started off really good. Once again, disturbing. The writing is great. This story isn't in a chat room style, but it still reads easily. This story felt longer, even though it isn't, and I think the overall pacing is better than the first one. However, I hated the ending and the supernatural elements. 2/5.

You'll find it's like that all over:

Once again started really well. Writing is consistently good. But this one was extremely short, leaving hardly any time to get invested. And the ending was a bit of a let down. 2/5.