A review by tanguera
Lamentation by Ken Scholes

4.0

This story is so great, that I'm giving it four stars despite some serious issues I had with grammar and the characterization of Rudolfo. You can't just tell me Rudolfo is a fop, you have to show me, and I never saw it. All I saw was an amazing leader, a man driven to do the best he could for his kingdom and friends. Never did a I see a foolish man overly concerned with appearance or clothes. Never.

But even with that, this story is unique and marches along. From almost the beginning, I had to know who was behind the destruction of Wyndwir and why it happened.