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A review by abholt96
Married by Wind by Angela J. Ford
2.0
great premise, but the writing needs work
“The rose bush reminded me that sometimes one must endure thorns to reach the loveliest flowers, but in the end, their beauty is worth the bloodshed.”
If you like ridiculous, cheesy lines that sound like they’re coming from a lovesick amateur poet without much prompting, you might enjoy this. It’s riddled with it.
I get that Novella’s are short, but if you can’t build a world and tell a good story in 200 pages, then make it a novel. Or don’t write it at all?
Nothing was ever explained. And yet, there was so much telling and not enough story. While I want to read the rest of the series, I’m no longer in a rush to do so.
2 stars because it was an interesting premise. It was like a twisted version of Aladdin. The writing just needs work.
“The rose bush reminded me that sometimes one must endure thorns to reach the loveliest flowers, but in the end, their beauty is worth the bloodshed.”
If you like ridiculous, cheesy lines that sound like they’re coming from a lovesick amateur poet without much prompting, you might enjoy this. It’s riddled with it.
I get that Novella’s are short, but if you can’t build a world and tell a good story in 200 pages, then make it a novel. Or don’t write it at all?
Nothing was ever explained. And yet, there was so much telling and not enough story. While I want to read the rest of the series, I’m no longer in a rush to do so.
2 stars because it was an interesting premise. It was like a twisted version of Aladdin. The writing just needs work.