A review by paperback_whiplash
The Wayward Girls by Amanda Mason

slow-paced

• Plot- or character-driven? A mix
• Strong character development? No
• Loveable characters? No
• Diverse cast of characters? No
• Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

2.0

This book was probably 100 pages too long. It followed 2 time lines, the "Then" and "Now".  Each timeline was crowded with characters who often seemed too similar, making it difficult to differentiate between them. Flat and repetitive characters and plot overall.  

I was left confused by Mason's choice to use a popular poem with altered pronouns. Was the sister Bee reciting something she read, pretending to be under the influence of a ghost? Or did Mason simply like the poem and think it spooky? The intentions weren't clear in the text. Left a bad taste in my mouth. 

"As I was walking on the stair, I met a girl who wasn't there. 
She wasnt there again today.
I wish, I wish she'd go away."

William Hughes Mearns "Antigonish" 1899 (He pronouns in his original version)

 

Unsatisfying ending.