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Psycho by Onley James
DID NOT FINISH: 33%

The way the author writes August reminds me of AH’s Twisted Love—kinda obnoxious 😭. He and Lucas develop this thing seemingly out of nowhere. We don’t really get to see Lucas or August’s impression of him before the instant attraction kicks in. I had the same problem with the previous book. 

I like that Noah still affects the plot even when he’s not the MC. Good continuity there, his conversations with August have been highlights. 

This might sound a bit mean but sadly Lucas reminds me of a clairvoyant, blander Will Graham. I love Will and the different ways people write him in fics but this was not doing it for me.

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