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meganlwill 's review for:

2.0

My interest is definitely waning, and there are an increasing number of stylistic annoyances….

- use of the word mate and the hyper-animalistic, toxically masculine, and hyper-binary focused descriptions of relationships
- no plot additions, really an unnecessary book in the grand scheme with the entire focus really being on one solstice party and the gifts that everyone bought each other
- constant bad and super sexual flirting through telepathy that is very unnecessary
- “male” and “female” to refer to everyone? that sucks

It feels like each book is getting less editing than the last at this point.