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A review by fic_it
Deviant Control by L.V. Lane
4.0
A surprisingly good find in a sea of Free, in the world of Kindle.
It’s cute. Our female lead has spark, spunk and a good head in her shoulders.
She’s got these beautiful equal parts of Omega while still maintaining her Doctor brain. The blend of the two combined speaks to my empathetic soul as she struggles with striking a balance between her designation and her desire to remain some of her independence and a part of her old self before she revealed. It’s a unique plight and it makes the journey readers go through with her unique bc she was so non-traditional. In a lot of ways that created this fun dynamic within the pages as we got to know her more that I sometimes find hard to sympathize with in other A&O books.
So this is cute.
I do wish for some things, I wish the guys were a bit more tender hearted and spoke on their feelings towards the FL. Aside from their stake of ownership and possession on her that seems to be all that they need in order to skirt around the need for them to put a solid label on their feelings other than “y’ur mine.” It’s a bit sad that the girl is the first to “fall in love” with them bc at least she can begin to admit what she’s feeling.
Other than that, I wish she had more big brain energy going on. Moments in the story that called upon her using her mind and her unique skills and abilities (aside from her obvious blood power). Bc if you think about it a lot of this read is about trying to get her to submit as an omega (which is fine) but we don’t get many excuses to really put ourselves in her shoes for exactly what she lost when she revealed as Omega and could no longer be trusted to be objective and whatnot. Which stinks bc science was her life and it would have been fun and unique to highlight a woman in STEM who could still be an Omega and leave the men reeling in her mental dust. That would have been fun.
FL: “E = mC^2” (fck if I know science-y stuff)
ML1: *shuts her up by kissing the sense out of her*
ML2: *looks serious, like he understands, then threatens to tell on her if she doesn’t get her a$$ out of the lab*
SEE!!! This could be soooo satisfying!!!
It’s cute. Our female lead has spark, spunk and a good head in her shoulders.
She’s got these beautiful equal parts of Omega while still maintaining her Doctor brain. The blend of the two combined speaks to my empathetic soul as she struggles with striking a balance between her designation and her desire to remain some of her independence and a part of her old self before she revealed. It’s a unique plight and it makes the journey readers go through with her unique bc she was so non-traditional. In a lot of ways that created this fun dynamic within the pages as we got to know her more that I sometimes find hard to sympathize with in other A&O books.
So this is cute.
I do wish for some things, I wish the guys were a bit more tender hearted and spoke on their feelings towards the FL. Aside from their stake of ownership and possession on her that seems to be all that they need in order to skirt around the need for them to put a solid label on their feelings other than “y’ur mine.” It’s a bit sad that the girl is the first to “fall in love” with them bc at least she can begin to admit what she’s feeling.
Other than that, I wish she had more big brain energy going on. Moments in the story that called upon her using her mind and her unique skills and abilities (aside from her obvious blood power). Bc if you think about it a lot of this read is about trying to get her to submit as an omega (which is fine) but we don’t get many excuses to really put ourselves in her shoes for exactly what she lost when she revealed as Omega and could no longer be trusted to be objective and whatnot. Which stinks bc science was her life and it would have been fun and unique to highlight a woman in STEM who could still be an Omega and leave the men reeling in her mental dust. That would have been fun.
FL: “E = mC^2” (fck if I know science-y stuff)
ML1: *shuts her up by kissing the sense out of her*
ML2: *looks serious, like he understands, then threatens to tell on her if she doesn’t get her a$$ out of the lab*
SEE!!! This could be soooo satisfying!!!