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A review by readingbelle
Feathermore by Lucy Swing
4.0
started 2hrs ago and @46% and its going well. I really want to know what is going on! I have been a little confused by some jumping around between POV and dreams?? Can't give it away but there is a bit of a flow problem for me in the "something tragic happens to Jade" section.
Finished! Well, that was not what I expected..the ending! Oh em geee..sad, mad, confused, that's me right now!
Job well done Lucy for writing a compelling angel story. It was enjoyable and I need to read book two now because you left us hanging in Feathermore.
There were some problems I had with the story
-Jade and Avan's relationship confused me. It seemed very hot then cold with out any dialogue. The important scene when she asked him the question in the car made no sense to me. If he loved her so much would he have just left the scene after she ran off? I couldn't get behind their relationship because he seemed to do weird things that proved he didn't love her as much as you would have thought and Jade acted immature in dealing with him as well.
- the drawn out explanation of everything at the end was a lot to take in at once. I would have preferred answers to be layed out throughout time instead of all at once.
-Nate and Claire keeping secrets. Again I had a hard time with them keeping so much from Jade
However, with all the above I still read and read and read dying to know the ending and enjoying it!
This is just my opinion! Go get the book and read it for yourself to see what you think and then let me know :)
Finished! Well, that was not what I expected..the ending! Oh em geee..sad, mad, confused, that's me right now!
Job well done Lucy for writing a compelling angel story. It was enjoyable and I need to read book two now because you left us hanging in Feathermore.
There were some problems I had with the story
-Jade and Avan's relationship confused me. It seemed very hot then cold with out any dialogue. The important scene when she asked him the question in the car made no sense to me. If he loved her so much would he have just left the scene after she ran off? I couldn't get behind their relationship because he seemed to do weird things that proved he didn't love her as much as you would have thought and Jade acted immature in dealing with him as well.
- the drawn out explanation of everything at the end was a lot to take in at once. I would have preferred answers to be layed out throughout time instead of all at once.
-Nate and Claire keeping secrets. Again I had a hard time with them keeping so much from Jade
However, with all the above I still read and read and read dying to know the ending and enjoying it!
This is just my opinion! Go get the book and read it for yourself to see what you think and then let me know :)