A review by isa_mclaren
The Goblin Market by Jennifer Melzer

2.0

This book could benefit greatly from some editing and proofreading. There are numerous minor mistakes of punctuation. I don't just mean missing or too many commas. I mean, a period in the middle of a sentence. Or, a pronoun and a name used as if it was a re-write that didn't quite get changed. The worst part was a character described as having lavender skin in one chapter, only to be referred to as green-skinned in the next chapter.

It's a shame, because the story is good. It's rich and compelling and the book could be so much better.

Also, this is the first in a series, which I didn't know when I started it.