A review by bargainsleuth
The Clue in the Diary by Carolyn Keene

4.0

One of the troubles of reading the Original Text Nancy Drews and then immediately reading the Revised Text is the threat of boredom because in many cases, it's the same story, just shortened and cleaned up of stereotyping language. That's how I felt when I started this RT version of The Clue in the Diary. It was almost identical to the OT, with a few minor revisions to the story. It was when the story diverged from the OT that things really picked up for me.

Every Nancy Drew fan that reads the OT and RT side-by-side says the OT is better, and in some ways yes, but in other ways no. RT Nancy has much more plausible story. She actually does more investigating instead of just stumbling onto things. Situations that didn't make sense in the original are changed so that they do make sense to the story. Racial stereotypes are pretty much gone in the RTs, as well. I prefer the RT most of the time, including this story.