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jamthespread 's review for:
War Hour
by Lauren Loscig
DID NOT FINISH: 0%
2 stars
I got an eARC of this book and I’m soft DNFing it for now.
The first thing is the grammatical errors. So many misplaced commas and confusing dialogue. I can only hope this gets fixed in the final copy.
Also, it get really confusing once the plot starts kicking up. I think this has most to do with the pacing, which was…interesting. The text would literally say “a week later” right after a big chunk that took place over a couple days.
Overall it felt like so little happened in so much text, and yet so little at the same time.
Another thing- it seems like the two love interests are a young heir around the same age as the mc, or a mysterious guy who seems young for his role, but much older than the mc.
I got an eARC of this book and I’m soft DNFing it for now.
The first thing is the grammatical errors. So many misplaced commas and confusing dialogue. I can only hope this gets fixed in the final copy.
Also, it get really confusing once the plot starts kicking up. I think this has most to do with the pacing, which was…interesting. The text would literally say “a week later” right after a big chunk that took place over a couple days.
Overall it felt like so little happened in so much text, and yet so little at the same time.
Another thing- it seems like the two love interests are a young heir around the same age as the mc, or a mysterious guy who seems young for his role, but much older than the mc.