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Onyx Storm by Rebecca Yarros
2.5
adventurous

I felt like this book the author was like "oh shit I forgot to do world building! Ummmm ok how bout a bunch of islands and each one has a theme and they'll go on a little tour. Omg and then each island will have a CHALLENGE related to the theme!!!" It's giving...she just binge watched 3 seasons of Survivor before writing this book. 

The supporting characters felt more homogenous and sidelined in this book which was disappointing. 

Still will read the next one because my girl does know how to write a cliffhanger ending