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mermaid914 's review for:
Between Commitment and Betrayal
by Shain Rose
I felt that this book had so much potential. It started off really good. And then it gradually just went downhill. I felt that there was a storyline, and angst, which I like in a book. However, the whole book felt choppy. I felt with the sex scenes were interspersed, but not well placed. There was a steamy scene very early in the book which I don’t think went well. The storyline was written in such a way that I felt that this book should be more of a slow burn. I also felt that the storyline about the h’s assault was also not well explained and choppy. I wish the other would’ve just explained it once and clearly. I was confused as to what really happened. And also at the end, the H pulling away from her and explaining why he did it was also confusing.