A review by jhen_squared
Headless, by Aveda Vice


I expected more

I thought this would be a nice short smutty read but it just...all felt so vague and like it was trying to be pretty and metaphorical the entire time. I felt like I read a summary of a sex scene and not an actual sex scene. I personally didn't find it erotic (which I know this author was going for based on the writing but we were held at such a distance) and it barely felt smutty to me. Not for me but I can see why the reasons I didn't like it would work for others.