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Faithbreaker by Hannah Kaner
3.0
adventurous dark tense medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Plot
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

This is, thankfully, a better book than the second. Chapter breaks felt much more even and made more sense. There were fewer confusingly structured sentences (but there is an obsession for commas abound that I found so distracting).

This book is very much about the war that is teased throughout book two, and there is no chill. I have a lot of mixed feelings. The Talicians are, like, simultaneously comically evil and plan outright to take over the world, but also outside of a few glancing thoughts and brief scenes showing that the soldiers are mostly starved kids, there's no complexity to their invasion. The political plotting with betrayals felt a bit underdeveloped. 

Character moments feel rushed and like they're getting in the ways of the battles, but I wanted the opposite. My favorite scene is just before the finale, where our main characters are back together around a campfire like they were before. There's a lot of tension and uncertainty, but this moment is special and they know it is. And then the moment is ruined. 

At first I actually enjoyed the chapter where Elo finally opens up, but what comes after just kills the mood. I was not sold on the romantic relationship between Elo and Arren. And more than that, I wasn't sold on Arren as a POV. It muddies the book and pacing and honestly, Arren's entanglement with Hestra is also under-explored. His over reliance on his cleric also gave me some big Song of Ice and Fire vibes, but not in a positive way. But I did laugh out loud on disbelief over what happens with that. 

The ending chapters did get me, and the final bits got me misty-eyed. But this, too, felt rushed and unsatisfying. There was a strange hesitance against showing too much emotion, even after describing grim battle after grim battle. 

This whole series is a decent 3/5. It has cool ideas that aren't always executed well, but well-crafted characters keep investment up as long as they're given room to breathe.

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