A review by basicallykris10
Preferential Treatment by Heather Guerre

2.0

This was a tired story with a femdom paint job with a pinch of incongruous wokeness. There’s a lot of eat the rich from our FMC but in the end demands a huge engagement ring… She’s a terrible character.

There’s absolutely no discussion of what our MMC wants/needs from this relationship and is putting it all in the hands of this inexperienced woman he’s asked to be a domme. There’s not even an illusion to a conversation. No rules, no expectations. Opens up for a lot of things to go wrong. Not that it matters because most of it happens off page or you start on the middle of it. With a concept that’s more erotic that a typical sugar daddy romance, you’d expect the story to reflect that. But it doesn’t.

I liked our MMC, despite him being a commonly used archetype. But that seems to be the case for the whole story. These sugar daddy type stories are always the exact same. Pay for company, not a relationship, fall in love anyways, breaks up so it doesn’t “get worse” or whatever, realize mistake, get back together. Every single time. Just in a different font.

Also, the sister plot line seemed so pointless? What did she bring to the story other than a olive branch during the third act breakup?