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A review by agentmozell
You Made a Fool of Death with Your Beauty by Akwaeke Emezi
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
2.0
This is my first book by the author, this is really not my kind of book and I think I should’ve just waited for Pet to become available on my Libby. I won’t say its bad, but its def not my sped and I’ll get more as to what bothered me below.
I read this via audiobook and the narrator was amazing. For the one I listened to the narrator was Bahni Turpin—10/10 great job. The writing (sans the strong language it starts with) is really poetic and beautiful.
Now for the book. I might put this under the spoiler warning (this is being prewritten in my notes while I’m nearing the end).
Also one thing I will give this book is that it made me hungry as the ML is a chef. Everything sounded delicious and made me hungry.
The beginning starts off with a lot of strong language, some that I’m far too white to say or comment on and it was a bit uncomfortable if I’m being honest. Then Feyi and Milan (I hope I spelled that right) became friends with benefits and it was just a weird thing, like I get her trauma, but it was just weird to me. Maybe because I’m ace so I don’t understand it?
Then her with Nasir was a weird thing too, taking it slow but they were not dating. I guess I don’t understand the going out, cuddling and kissing without being an “item” so to speak. I really liked Nasir and thought he was a good fit for her. So when the book started bringing her close with his dad and, lets just be honest, turned lust into insta love I was rolling my eyes a bit. The age gap didn’t bother me to much, I mean she’s 29 and he’s 49 so whatever. They’re both consenting adults. But it was the fact she went from Milan to his friend Nasir and now Nasir’s DAD that weirded me out.
Like that shits messy messy and she should’ve followed through with the clean break.
Then chapter 17 happened and oh boy, the 180 flip with Nasir’s personality caught me so off guard. I guess it happens a lot with “nice guys” turning out to be not who women thought they were. But the fact he was kicking her out of his dads house had me low key cackling in a why. Like bro, that’s not your house. When he said “you deserve this” I felt myself getting angry. Him calling her trash made me even angrier. Then the fact he wasn’t even listening to her was the icing on the cake.
In a way I do feel that this was the author trying to get the reader to accept the fact that Feyi and Alim were the end game. But it’s hard to tell when there was no other hints that Nasir could be like that. HOWEVER, I would like to stress that I personally have not been in an abusive relationship and so maybe this is a normal stereotype of “they never gave any signs they could do such things.” I don’t doubt that perhaps Nasir was capable all along, but it just seemed kinda off character.
I also thing its really awkward that every page we’re told how beautiful, pretty, gorgeous, etc every fucking character is. Everyone is made out to be a walking god or goddess and its just really weird that everyone is viewed like that. It’s just a bit unrealistic that nobody seems to have any physical flaws.
Oh and then the fallout, the fallout was so rough. I was anticipating it being bad because, you know, she and the dad fell in lust, but Nasir’s reaction was way over the top. Then Lorraine’s was just cruel. She was kind cold to Feyi from the start so I wasn’t too surprised that she was even meaner during the fallout. But I was surprised that she was THAT mean. I guess we know they’re cut out of the inheritance.
And I’m low key cackling that Feyi is thinking that she’s not a gold digger but I kinda think she is.
The sanest character of all this was Joy ironically enough.
And her realizing she loved him at the end and wanting to run away? That’s just..wow. She realized her lust went to love and was like “WAIT I NEED TO GO HOME”. Like girl…you tore apart the family and now you wanna dip? Like that’s now how shit works. Then the ending…its so strange. I never understood the instalove trope because it just seems too unrealistic.
Ah well, I have Pet on hold, maybe that'll be more my speed.
I read this via audiobook and the narrator was amazing. For the one I listened to the narrator was Bahni Turpin—10/10 great job. The writing (sans the strong language it starts with) is really poetic and beautiful.
Now for the book. I might put this under the spoiler warning (this is being prewritten in my notes while I’m nearing the end).
Also one thing I will give this book is that it made me hungry as the ML is a chef. Everything sounded delicious and made me hungry.
The beginning starts off with a lot of strong language, some that I’m far too white to say or comment on and it was a bit uncomfortable if I’m being honest. Then Feyi and Milan (I hope I spelled that right) became friends with benefits and it was just a weird thing, like I get her trauma, but it was just weird to me. Maybe because I’m ace so I don’t understand it?
Then her with Nasir was a weird thing too, taking it slow but they were not dating. I guess I don’t understand the going out, cuddling and kissing without being an “item” so to speak. I really liked Nasir and thought he was a good fit for her. So when the book started bringing her close with his dad and, lets just be honest, turned lust into insta love I was rolling my eyes a bit. The age gap didn’t bother me to much, I mean she’s 29 and he’s 49 so whatever. They’re both consenting adults. But it was the fact she went from Milan to his friend Nasir and now Nasir’s DAD that weirded me out.
Like that shits messy messy and she should’ve followed through with the clean break.
Then chapter 17 happened and oh boy, the 180 flip with Nasir’s personality caught me so off guard. I guess it happens a lot with “nice guys” turning out to be not who women thought they were. But the fact he was kicking her out of his dads house had me low key cackling in a why. Like bro, that’s not your house. When he said “you deserve this” I felt myself getting angry. Him calling her trash made me even angrier. Then the fact he wasn’t even listening to her was the icing on the cake.
In a way I do feel that this was the author trying to get the reader to accept the fact that Feyi and Alim were the end game. But it’s hard to tell when there was no other hints that Nasir could be like that. HOWEVER, I would like to stress that I personally have not been in an abusive relationship and so maybe this is a normal stereotype of “they never gave any signs they could do such things.” I don’t doubt that perhaps Nasir was capable all along, but it just seemed kinda off character.
I also thing its really awkward that every page we’re told how beautiful, pretty, gorgeous, etc every fucking character is. Everyone is made out to be a walking god or goddess and its just really weird that everyone is viewed like that. It’s just a bit unrealistic that nobody seems to have any physical flaws.
Oh and then the fallout, the fallout was so rough. I was anticipating it being bad because, you know, she and the dad fell in lust, but Nasir’s reaction was way over the top. Then Lorraine’s was just cruel. She was kind cold to Feyi from the start so I wasn’t too surprised that she was even meaner during the fallout. But I was surprised that she was THAT mean. I guess we know they’re cut out of the inheritance.
And I’m low key cackling that Feyi is thinking that she’s not a gold digger but I kinda think she is.
The sanest character of all this was Joy ironically enough.
And her realizing she loved him at the end and wanting to run away? That’s just..wow. She realized her lust went to love and was like “WAIT I NEED TO GO HOME”. Like girl…you tore apart the family and now you wanna dip? Like that’s now how shit works. Then the ending…its so strange. I never understood the instalove trope because it just seems too unrealistic.
Ah well, I have Pet on hold, maybe that'll be more my speed.
Content Warnings
Moderate: Death
Minor: Domestic abuse