A review by storykotori
They Both Die at the End by Adam Silvera

sad slow-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? N/A
  • Strong character development? No
  • Loveable characters? No
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated

1.5

Dear Author:
  • Just because your audience target is 13-14 years old doesn't mean you need to write as if you are also that age.
  • The audience is aware your characters are dying and do not need you to remind them every three sentences.
  • Random quotes from famous people that don't specifically relate to your characters doesn't make your book deep.
  • There is no need to recap song lyrics from every song. This isn't fanficton.

The premise had potential, but the execution was poor; which was further emphasized by the juvenility of the writing style. Unfortunately, the characters weren't likable enough to pull you through.
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