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The Roughest Draft by Emily Wibberley, Austin Siegemund-Broka
2.5
hopeful reflective slow-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

This had a lot of potential but with the split POV chapters and flashbacks from both main characters, it just felt choppy. Every chapter is 6 pages or less and just didn’t feel… done? Not sure. Anyway—skimmed the last 20 pages and didn’t really feel there was a conclusion other than “yay we finished writing the book”.